As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above  (开始描述图画）， 加上which is both upsetting and most thought-provoding (第一端）描述图画
　　
　　The aim  of the painter of the drawing above can be briefly stated as follow (陈述观点 ）  可以把这些话加到作文中去 结合作文内容
　　perhapers no other things could gain more public attention than。。。in china for the time being
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　　It is generally believed that。。。is a hot topic which is most talked about ，not only by the city residents but also by famers。 (任选一个）
　　
　　As the society becomes more and more advanced and complicated 。 。。。plays a more and more important role in the life of individual members of the society and in the development of the society itself
　　
　　According to recent investigation， there is an increasing numbers of people who share the concern about the issue of  。。。 which is a problem that deserves public，professional and political attention
　　
　　Different people have different opinions。 Everything has its advantages and disadvantages 。It is  assciated  with your experience ，life style and emotional concern 。It is really true for this case 
　　
　　Advantage and disadvantage are the basic dual concepts of nearly everthing in our life ，It goes without saying that for every advantage，there is always a disadvantage 。An advantageous for one group might to prove disdvantages to others 。It is really true for this case(作比较）
　　
　　句中最好使用一个倒装句 only + 状语 + 小倒装   如
　　only when we develop ourselves in a well-rounded way ，can we become prodctive memebers of society （正文）
　　
　　counter-measures must be taken immediately so as to  。。。
　　First of all law and regulations must be set up  In addition ，a long-term and nation -wide campaign must be launched to  popularize。。。among the general public。 Only in this way can we keep。。。(结尾）

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