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    Fake Commodities

    In recent years, a lot of fake commodities have appeared in the market. These fake commodities have done great harm to the consumers and the society.

    Since the policy of reform was adopted, China 's economic have improved. A lot of people getting richer, and their living conditions are getting better. But still some of them are not satisfied. They dream of getting rich overnight and living a heavenly life, which, of course, is impossible to achieve by fair means. So they risk breaking the law to produce the market fake commodities.

    Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do immeasurable harm to the society. The direct victims are the consumers. As the quality of the fake commodities is always very poor, the consumers may suffer great losses. Certain fake commodities, such as food and medicine, will cause irreparable harm to the health and well-being of the consumers. Fake commodities also cut into the profits of the brand-name-owners. Since the fake ones are cheaper, people tend to be reluctant to buy the genuine ones.

    [SMS]

    In recent years, mobile phone play a important role in people's life. Besides calling other people, the short message become the chief way of connect with others.

    Short message be used to delivery the massage and affection.It is very convenient and stupid.When you process the short message, you will not feel any uncomfortable, like strain, in your heart. And this is a good way of economical money. But there are some problems to use short message. In instance, some advertisement always bore you when you sleep or in class or any other time. Furthermore, you may receive some strange massage that you don't know who send it.

    As far as I am concerned, short message is a very useful way to connect with others. You can send a short message if you don't want or don't know how to say. Such as apology why not we use this way to turn our life harmony?

    The Use of Internet on Campus

    Nowadays, internet has play an important role in people's life. We can use the internet to do lots of things. Such as find message, send or receive E-mail, play games and so on. It is accelerate colorful of our life.

    Although internet have so many usages. A disccusion start that should the internet be used in freedom. Different people have different words. Some people said that internet should not open for student freedom. On one hand, they haven't adequate tine for study if they play game for a long time. On the other hand, it is harmful for vision and healthy if student seat in front of the computer. Other people don't agree with them for the reason that use the computer freedom is student's right.

    As far as I am concerned, internet have more advantage than shortage. Why not we use its advantage to turn our life convenient? I think, it is better to open the internet at given time.

    Recruitment Letter

    Dear all,

    Thank you for concerning about association of Chinese culture for this years. Now, we recruiting new person to work for our association.

    Association of Chinese culture have ten years history .It plays an important role of introduce and promtive Chinese culture. Association always have activities, such as travel, campain of introduction, work without payment for the well-know place.

    Following is our request:

    1,Man,170 centimetres high;woman,160 centimetres high;

    2,Outsdanding ability of communication;

    3,Warm heart(you should glad to help others if they need).

    If you interested in our association plaease call 010-99999999 or E-mail. Welcome to join us.

    句子表达练习答案

    1. No one can deny the fact that a person's education is the most significant aspect of his life.

    2. People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

    3. According to a recent survey, four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

    4. The latest surveys show that quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

    5. No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

    6. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

    7. Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.

    8. In view of the seriousness of this problem，effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

    9. Proper measures must be enforced to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

    10. With the development of science and technology, more and more work is done by computers, while in the past this was done by human beings.

    11. For all the advantages of SMS, they are not without any disadvantages.

    12. (Unfortunately,) this phenomenon has generated negative effects on the youngsters.

    13. I'm very sorry to decline this job offer.

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