比较型作文之11分作文
比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式比较两种。说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。
在四、六级考试中的比较型作文多以议论式比较的形式出现。议论式比较以比较事物优劣、阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。
11分作文只是在8分作文的基础上进行改进，通过篇章的连贯、句型的优化来实现。
一、连贯性
连贯性是写作的一个重要原则。句子之间的链接主要通过衔接词的使用体现连贯性，根据过渡衔接词在篇章中的作用，可分为引介词、承接词和总结词三大类：
1. 引介词在篇章中担当引出话题或观点的作用，根据其本身的含义，可细分如下：
（1）时间词（组）：nowadays,at present,recently,now ,lately,in some cases;
（2）一般观点词（组）：in general,generally,generally spraking,as we know,as is known to all,as is generally accepted,regarding,concerning,as for... as to ..., as regards;
（3）个人观点词（组）：firstly,first of all ,in the firest place, to begin with , to start with , for one thing, as for me, in my opinion, on the one hand;
2.承接词在篇章中承接主题句或上一个支持句，可表递进或转折，根据其本身的含义，可分如下：
纯粹承接词：second(ly),third(ly),for another,on the other hand;
递进承接词：besides,in addition, in addition to ,furthermore,moreover,namely;
并列承接词：meanwhile,at the same time;
原因承接词：because,for , as, in that,owing to,due to ,on accout of,on the groud of , as a result of;
比较承接词：equally important,similarly,likewise,in the same way,in common;
对比承接词：on the contrary, in contrast , by contrast , whereas,instead, conversely;
强调承接词：in paricular, paricularly,most important of all,needless to say,especially,above all,on top of all this;
转折让步承接词：although,though,nevertheless, however,but,yet , admittedly, it is true... but, in spite of , even though, granted that , despite, in spite of , unfortunately,nonetheless;
总结词在篇章中推出结论和后果：
(1) 结果词：thus , consequently,hence, therefore, accordingly,as a consequence, for this reason;
(2) 总结词：in a word, all in all ,to sum up, briefly,in brief,in short,in summary,undoubtedly,by and large , as has been noted.
具有相似意义和功能的衔接词在上下文可以灵活替换。
二、常用句型
1、首段常用句型：
Nowadays,there are two ways to do..., such as A and B.
It is widely accepted / an undeniable fact that...
Some people prefer A... while others...
There used to be a heated discussion over whether A is more important than B.
Those who are in favor of A argue that...
In my point of view, I like a much more than B.
Despite the fact that majority of people tend to / prefer to ... , I'm in favor of...
A and B are of the same / equal importance.While the former ... , the later ....
While I attach much importance to A, I won't give up any chance to do B.
2、主体部分常用句型：
A prides itself / themselves on sth however, its / their ... counterpart / B...
First and foremost, ... what's more,... Last but not least,...
Ranging from ... to ...（用于举例事物）
When it comes to ... （用于引出话题）
A's merits mean nothing when B's advantages are considered / mentioned
Admittedly, / of course, / True, / It is true that A is..., but B...
However, for the demerits / disadvantages A has , it has the advantage that...
3、结尾段常用句型：
As a result /For this reason, I like doing...
In spite of the said advantages of A, I will choose B...
Of course,A has its own merits.But I'm still in favor of B.
Therefore,A and B are of equal importance. The former helps to do..., and the latter contributes to...
The secret of ... lies in the combination of both A and B.
作业：（以下为一篇8分范文，请练习变换句型，按要求改写成句型结构漂亮的11分作文）
It is often difficult for a student to decide whether he shall have roommates or not .In my oopinion, having roommates is always better.
要求：在粗体句中体现转折关系；且用让步句型体现于室友同住的优点多于缺点。
